To me, the one on the left is better (with a few tiny changes) . Font choice is ...

low_battery on March 28, 2015 | parent | context | favorite | on: Clean Up Your Mess – A Guide to Visual Design for ...

To me, the one on the left is better (with a few tiny changes) . Font choice is better, it is more legible and actually it has better balance overall. So I think author "fixed" it too much :)