Damn, this is some bad writing. I know we live in an age of post-editorial content, but can we please avoid sharing stuff with gratuitous comma splices and "your" vs. "you're" confusion? If I wanted to read shit like that, I'd open up the comments on Reddit.
I'm sorry that you found the post hard to read, I do have a tendency to get there and their and the others mixed up and my writing style is a bit, strange but a lot of people don't seem to mind and get used to it, I am trying to improve with each post.
This might be my failing, but the your/you're confusion is something that always makes me question the worth of what I'm reading. Which is a shame, because it was a good post otherwise.
I'm glad you're trying to improve with each post. The way to get better at writing is to write.
