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You could remove the sentence I quoted, keep the thing from the conductor about bison, and it wouldn't make a difference to the story [1]. It's a "lead in" only in the extremely literal sense that the one sentence comes before the other one.

[1] It might even work better, since it lets you draw your own conclusions about the anecdote. Not everything needs to be a lesson.




I agree that the story flows better without it but I'm saying it is not irrelevant like you claim. It is bad writing if nothing else.




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