The dig against FP is weird since the "good refactor" also uses FP, just a built in one in JS. Which I agree is better, but mostly by being built in and idiomatic, it's still exactly as functional.
"I don't like this style of FP coding" ok: if you run the group and own the codebase you can enforce that. So good refactoring is style guide enforcement.
I think I over-read his dislike of FP. really the complaint is "why did you introduce a new dependency" which I am totally fine with, as a complaint. Thats not cool.
Many of his examples kind-of bury the lede. If he had tried to write an abstract up front, I think "dont code FP" wouldn't have been in it. "use the methods in the language like .filter and .map" might be.
On point. Even then mentioning it used filter and map. But the bad refactor also uses filter and map. It's the exact same change of programming paradigm.
Given the text, I would have expected some minor refactor with range-based for loops (are these a thing? My JS is rusty). Where you get the advantage of map (no off-by-one indexing errors) without changing the programming paradigm.