>So how might we approach idea generation around knowledge work without idealizing the knowledge worker?
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It’s conversational, and adds nothing: the reader who was following along already asked themselves that question, and the reader who’s hasn’t latched onto the thesis doesn’t understand why this is a good question to ask.
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