The entire page is fiction, presumably. Hopefully.
That being said, it's not professional fiction. It's possibly the first work of the writer, and works because of talent (probably) and a good premise (definitely), but it's sorely lacking in polish and editing. I wouldn't look too closely at the cracks. :)
That being said, it's not professional fiction. It's possibly the first work of the writer, and works because of talent (probably) and a good premise (definitely), but it's sorely lacking in polish and editing. I wouldn't look too closely at the cracks. :)