That's pretty good, but for the people I'm thinking of, including Theresa May, that's about 10X too long. I like the last 5 points. It reminded me of Cory Doctorow's 'and now you've got two problems'.
Sadly we need something that is not much more than a paragraph. Maybe something that would fit in a tweet. Something that competes with 'people want to blow you up, surrender your privacy so we can catch them'.
http://coding2learn.org/blog/2017/06/11/dear-theresa/
The problem is that the subject is inherently complex, and abstractions and analogies can only go so far.