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I see that you have changed the tagline to "your social memory" due to feedback from users. However, the language is really unclear and grammatically incorrect - it's a sentence fragment. Some possible solutions:

* Introduce a verb "Build your social memory"

* Introduce Monica "Your social memory, now handled by your digital assistant Monica"

* Some combo of the above "Build your social memory through your digital assistant Monica"

I'd also recommend separate each question on separate line and left align them for readability. I'd iterate on this language as it's the most important content on your page since it's the first thing user's see. You might also want to pull some of the content that is below the fold to this section.

Great idea!




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